I gonna talk about a charity event.
In my summer camps, one day, we do a charity market.
Each group does a lot of things like pictures frame, keyrings, pen decoration, magnets and other things.
The money we raise goes to the misions of Congo, to help people of there.
One year we raised money to buy a motorbike for a priest, to help him to go from one place to another.
So this year, i will continue doing this charity market, and my goal is to raise more more money than last year!
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Well done Caroline. Thanks for sending in your first homework assignment. Here are my corrections:
ResponderEliminarI (gonna) ‘M GOING TO talk about a charity event.
(In) AT my summer camp(s), one day, we (do)HAD a charity market.
Each group (does)MADE a lot of things like picture(s) frameS, keyrings, pen decorationS, magnets and other things.
The money we raiseD (goes)WENT to the misSions (of) IN THE Congo, to help people (of) there.
One year we raised money to buy a motorbike for a priest, to help him (to go) GET from one place to another.
So this year, I will continue doing this charity market, and my goal is to raise more more money than last year!